Senin, 09 November 2009

QUIZ: POSITION AND TOPIC SENTENCE OF PARAGRAPHS

Paragraph I
3_a. Next, add anti freeze to your windshield washer fluid; otherwise, the fluid will freeze and possibly break the container.
1_b. First, put on snow tires if you plan to dtive on snowy, icy roads very often.
TS_c. Driving in winter, especially on snowy, icy roads, can be less trouble some if you take a few simple precautions*.
4_d. Finally, it is also a good idea to carry tire chains, a can of spray to unfreeze door locks and a windshield scraper in your car when driving in winter weather.
2_e. Second, check the amount of antifreeze in your radiator and add more if necessary.

Paragraph 2
3_a. Furthermore, researchers are continuing to work on the development of an efficient, electrically powered automobile.
TS_b. Researchers in the automobile industry are experimenting with different types of engines and fuels as alternative to the conventional gasoline engines.
1_c. One new type of engine, which burns diesel oil instead of gasoline, has been available for several years.
4_d. Finally, several automobile manufactures are experimenting with methanol, which is a mixture of gasoline and methyl alcohol, as an automobile fuel.
2_e. A second type is the gas turbine engine, which can use fuels made from gasoline, diesel oil, kerosene, other petroleum distillates*, or methanol.

Paragraph 3
3_a. Later on, people began to write on pieces of leather, which were rolled into scrolls. 1_b. In the earliest times, people carved or painted messages on rocks.
2_c. In the middle Ages, heavy paper called parchment was used for writing; books were laboratoriously copied by hand.
4_d. With the invention of the printing press in the middle of the fifteenth century, the modern printing industry was born.
TS_e. Some form of written communication has been used throughout the centuries.

Paragraph 4
3_a. If there had been a big storm on the day of a baby’s birth, the baby might have been named thunder cloud.
TS_b. American Indian names are very descriptive, for Indian were usually named for physical attribute, for an occurrence in nature, or for animal.
1_c. Grey Eagle, red dog, Big bear, and spotted wolf are example of Indians named after animals.
2_d. Indians with distinctive physical characteristics might be given such names as big foot or crooked leg.

Paragraph 5
2_a. For one thing, Individual I.Q. scores vary considerably.
1_b. Many experts also question whether I.Q. scores are related to intelligence.
3_c. Furthermore, most psychologists agree that intelligence test are biased* in favor of middle-class children.
TS_d. The validity* of standardized intelligence test is being seriously questioned by educators and physiologists.
4_e. In fact, motivation seems to be just as important as intelligence in determining a person’s ability to learn.

assignment for outlining

Philippines sends Aid for Thyphoon Damage
P2: medicine and clothing had been sent to Visayan.
P3: Most of the fatalities and missing were on the island
P4: The typhoon causes 90 % of the houses in capiz werw destroyed

Amtrak Derailment Near Secaucus Injures 35
P1: New York,Nov.23-An Amtrak fastmail train carrying 108 passengers & crew members derailed as it was nearing New York at 6:32 A.M.
P2: Amtrak announced that no one was killed but 35 persons were injured
P3: Senator Frank Lautenberg was informed that a boat had passed through tha bridge just two hours earlier.

Boston-Bound Train Derails,34 Hurt
P1: New York,Nov:23-An Amtrak in headed for Boston derailed making into a muddy mash &injured 34 people,none of them seriously
P2: The accident stopped all train travel between New York and Newark.
P3: Most were treated and released from hospitals in the area.

"When You Lose Someone,Forever"

Nobody can feel,how terrible it feels when you lose someone,neither that person is special or not.

Death can change everything in your life.Just imagine that when you are talking to somebody then someone come up to you,,then said "He or she had passed away".At that time,,you don't know what you have to do..you'll be confused and feel pain in your heart like someone stab you on your back.Feel more confused more than ever you can imagine..Maybe in yourthoughts there will be so many questions,,like "WHY??" or "WHY TODAY??"...

If that day you lose someone that's very special in your life,,you'll feel like in hell,,more hurt than a breaking up thing,,more worse than got a really bad mark. However,,it gets more worse if you lose someone in front of you. All you can do just cry,,cry,,and cry..until you can calm again.

For those who cannot feel the feeling or be in place at such time (when death take someone)..Maybe,,if you want to make comfort your friend that who is in shock,,you can't say "i know how does it feel" You really,,really can't say that (cause,you really don't understand how does it feel).All you can say to comfort your friend,,just say ""Maybe,,it's the best for him to go know..." or " Let him go,,and go to the best place beside god.."
Because,,
"Somepeople live,,somepeople laugh,,somepeople love,,but "death..",we don't know,,when will it take us or others.."
Always pray and pray everytime cause you still have a chance,,because you don't know when is your time to go....


dedicated to Alm. mas Arya Dewangga (my brother's best friend,,and my senior in 15 senior high shool in surabaya)